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11.02.2017, 06:49 PM
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little trouble girl
Join Date: Mar 2006
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A tanka is a Japanese verse form in five lines, the first and third of five syllables and the rest of seven.
I invite anyone and everyone to pull out the dictionary and/or a thesaurus, study or exercise some English to put to work at the Americanized tanka form of poetry here! What say we have some fun with this challenge?  Haloes trap us rocking embodied star-shine effete gravity draws into many zeroes heavens woven of our hearts & Haloes trap our rocking disembodiment heathery lift-off embeds bedazzlement b'low supervenient scores
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11.02.2017, 09:05 PM
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little trouble girl
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Soft suggestion wanes
humored by dwindling voices unto a hard void morphoses wrangling exits asunder seek media |
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11.02.2017, 09:15 PM
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Banned
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: NYC
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Satan rules the earth
The human is weak, servile the miracle of life corroded volcano toast wifi shear topical oil |
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11.05.2017, 08:24 PM
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little trouble girl
Join Date: Mar 2006
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fraught death threat rivals
a throwback riotous heat finds old cinders to reignite flashbacks toward wizardly conflagration |
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11.06.2017, 12:27 AM
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little trouble girl
Join Date: Mar 2006
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against feud fervent
angelic mindful minstrels frame sound majesty afflicted folk swarm to find warm magic esprit de corps |
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11.06.2017, 09:30 AM
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invito al cielo
Join Date: Jun 2008
Posts: 3,305
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Rather have a tanka gin!
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11.07.2017, 12:04 AM
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little trouble girl
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 40
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focused on raindrop
gloomy, dark, with power out mindful remainder falls swift, attractive, stark, lone bright pop slow-motion collapse  |
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11.10.2017, 11:30 PM
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little trouble girl
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 40
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proletariat
new age riotous protests at a divine loss "equalized" modernity overthrows all of the time  |
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