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Trasher02 · 02.15.2008, 03:36 PM

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Originally Posted by atsonicpark

One time I was tripping and I saw various little angel versions of me flying around and cutting heads off of other angels.

Related: One time I was tripping and I thought the carpet I was sleeping on was trying to eat me.

atsonicpark · 02.15.2008, 03:46 PM

tripping > everything

Crumb's Crunchy Delights · 02.15.2008, 03:47 PM

one time i stood up too quickly from a kneeling position, and i remained dizzy for a full minute

Trasher02 · 02.15.2008, 03:59 PM

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Originally Posted by atsonicpark

tripping > everything

Agreed

SpectralJulianIsNotDead · 02.15.2008, 04:35 PM

One time when I was a teenager I was totally desperate to have some imagery to masturbate to and so I used the TV Guide. Allysa Milano was the cover.

Crumb's Crunchy Delights · 02.15.2008, 05:30 PM

one time I was wondering why the baseball was getting bigger. Then it hit me.

Sheriff Rhys Chatham · 02.15.2008, 05:56 PM

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Originally Posted by Rob Instigator

one time my friends and I were driving around high as hell and doing donuts on an elemntary school parking lot when we crashed my frind's mom's car into a concrete embankment and then we drove back to my mom's and proceeded to manufcature a "car crash" scene by beating the shit out of a fire hydrant with tools from the back of the aforementioned car. we told his mom that soem drunk was aiming for us and we swerved and hit the fire hydrant. it worked too. (3 in the AM!)

That is one of the greatest things I 've ever heard.

gmku · 02.15.2008, 06:11 PM

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Originally Posted by SpectralJulianIsNotDead

One time when I was a teenager I was totally desperate to have some imagery to masturbate to and so I used the TV Guide. Allysa Milano was the cover.

One time I used an ad in a New Yorker magazine and my dad walked in on me. Literature, eh? I think is what he said.

Kloriel · 02.15.2008, 06:44 PM

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Originally Posted by SpectralJulianIsNotDead

One time I went to an abandoned insane asylum and these hicks that were also trespassing (this was a pretty popular place to trespass) kept trying to scare my group.

Your intro is good here and you've got some rising action, but you're not taking it anywhere. An ellaboration on 'scare' would take the action over the peak and then your denouement could deal with the repercussions / consequences.

Kloriel · 02.15.2008, 07:00 PM

one time i wrote a terrible story and deleted it

HaydenAsche · 02.15.2008, 07:16 PM

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Originally Posted by atsonicpark

tripping > everything

Agree to no end.

One time, I was tripping balls on acid and Panda Bear's entire album sounded insane. I was having the most intense visuals of my life. Life was beginning and ending. It was fantastic. As soon as the music would stop, so would most of the OEVs.

m1rr0r dash · 02.15.2008, 10:21 PM

one time i [TMI] and then she just looked at me with this blank stare, so i [TMI]. at this point, she started getting really pissed and [TMI]. i turned around and tried to leave, but she [TMI]. That was when i [TMI].

...a couple of week's later i got [TMI]. eventually she [TMI] and i had to [TMI]. god that sucked....

gmku · 02.15.2008, 10:27 PM

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Originally Posted by Kloriel

Your intro is good here and you've got some rising action, but you're not taking it anywhere. An ellaboration on 'scare' would take the action over the peak and then your denouement could deal with the repercussions / consequences.

I like the more open-ended plot for its defiance of expectations. All we know is that they kept getting scared; there are, in effect, no repercussions or consequences, simply a relentless state of existential fright. It works for me.

m1rr0r dash · 02.15.2008, 10:42 PM

one time when i was tripping by myself one beautiful saturday afternoon, my sister-in-law came over. i wasn't really tripping balls, but i was tripping hard enough to think that this was an alternate reality that i had mind-control powers over... so i pulled out my TMI and started to TMI. she just started laughing and stood there watching me. she was the one i had gotten the acid from and knew i was tripping alone that afternoon.... so she might have just come over to check up on me, or maybe to fuck with me. either way... fucking hawtest thing ever. she never let me live that down...

gmku · 02.15.2008, 10:45 PM

One time I went to school in just my underwear. Then I woke up.

pbradley · 02.15.2008, 10:53 PM

One time I was taking a cab van to SFO with a couple of strangers and when the cab driver asked us what airline we were so he could drop us off, I looked at my e-ticket print out thing and responded with "Orbitz." I quickly corrected myself but it was ridiculously embarrassing.

gmku · 02.15.2008, 10:57 PM

You should have passed it off as a joke. Look around. "Orbitz. Get it?"

Cantankerous · 02.15.2008, 11:06 PM

one time i put bacon on an injury.

m1rr0r dash · 02.15.2008, 11:09 PM

one time i had to put the hurt on some bacon.

girlgun · 02.16.2008, 07:07 PM

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Originally Posted by m1rr0r dash

one time i had to put the hurt on some bacon.

haha.

02.15.2008, 03:46 PM	#82
atsonicpark invito al cielo Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 28,843	tripping > everything __________________
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02.15.2008, 03:47 PM	#83
Crumb's Crunchy Delights expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: okie's in the pokie Posts: 1,352	one time i stood up too quickly from a kneeling position, and i remained dizzy for a full minute
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02.15.2008, 04:35 PM	#85
SpectralJulianIsNotDead invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 7,409	One time when I was a teenager I was totally desperate to have some imagery to masturbate to and so I used the TV Guide. Allysa Milano was the cover.
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02.15.2008, 05:30 PM	#86
Crumb's Crunchy Delights expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: okie's in the pokie Posts: 1,352	one time I was wondering why the baseball was getting bigger. Then it hit me.
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02.15.2008, 07:00 PM	#90
Kloriel expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,554	one time i wrote a terrible story and deleted it
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02.15.2008, 10:21 PM	#92
m1rr0r dash invito al cielo Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: atari Posts: 2,228	one time i [TMI] and then she just looked at me with this blank stare, so i [TMI]. at this point, she started getting really pissed and [TMI]. i turned around and tried to leave, but she [TMI]. That was when i [TMI]. ...a couple of week's later i got [TMI]. eventually she [TMI] and i had to [TMI]. god that sucked.... __________________
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02.15.2008, 10:42 PM	#94
m1rr0r dash invito al cielo Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: atari Posts: 2,228	one time when i was tripping by myself one beautiful saturday afternoon, my sister-in-law came over. i wasn't really tripping balls, but i was tripping hard enough to think that this was an alternate reality that i had mind-control powers over... so i pulled out my TMI and started to TMI. she just started laughing and stood there watching me. she was the one i had gotten the acid from and knew i was tripping alone that afternoon.... so she might have just come over to check up on me, or maybe to fuck with me. either way... fucking hawtest thing ever. she never let me live that down... __________________
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02.15.2008, 10:45 PM	#95
gmku invito al cielo Join Date: May 2006 Location: Oxford, England Posts: 15,225	One time I went to school in just my underwear. Then I woke up. __________________ Ever notice how this place just basically, well, sucks.
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02.15.2008, 10:53 PM	#96
pbradley invito al cielo Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: SoKo Posts: 10,621	One time I was taking a cab van to SFO with a couple of strangers and when the cab driver asked us what airline we were so he could drop us off, I looked at my e-ticket print out thing and responded with "Orbitz." I quickly corrected myself but it was ridiculously embarrassing.
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02.15.2008, 10:57 PM	#97
gmku invito al cielo Join Date: May 2006 Location: Oxford, England Posts: 15,225	You should have passed it off as a joke. Look around. "Orbitz. Get it?" __________________ Ever notice how this place just basically, well, sucks.
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02.15.2008, 11:06 PM	#98
Cantankerous invito al cielo Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: A RETIREMENT HOME Posts: 18,499	one time i put bacon on an injury. __________________ RETIRED
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02.15.2008, 11:09 PM	#99
m1rr0r dash invito al cielo Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: atari Posts: 2,228	one time i had to put the hurt on some bacon. __________________
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