07.24.2009, 08:49 AM | #1 |
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I know next to nothing about poetry but here's some:
The Festival I don't want to festival. I don't want to set up camp next to your neon-lit clothes I can't sleep with the lights on. I don't want to get in a scrap with a man who's been dressed as a clown for 3 solid days never liked clowns. I don't want to go see Radiohead as the people around me holler creep ad infinitum. I don't want to fuck the man by putting £200 in his pocket I hear it's his orifice of choice. I don't want to get so drunk I drown Franz Ferdinand with my own vomit. I don't want to buy a £7 burger that cost the vendor 20 pence and the young calf, it's life. I don't want to sit around the instant grills listening to you play MGMT on acoustic guitar. I don't want to say hello to MTV. I don't want to say hello to STD. I don't wanna catch festivitis There's no cure. I don't want to finally get some use out of my $80 Wayfarers imported from the States via blistered Asian hands Your wage at the GAP seems way fairer. I don't want to get my Espadrilles muddy. I don't want to loiter on mother nature. I don't want to litter on mother nature. I don't want to ____ a stranger when our bodies smell stranger than this sentence reads. I don't want to wear a dirty wristband for a year just in case people forget I went Reading last year and the year before not going this year though too mainstream. I don't want to festival I just want what's best, is all. |
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07.24.2009, 09:03 AM | #2 |
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I've never liked clowns either, but...uh.....you wear espadrilles??
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07.24.2009, 09:04 AM | #3 |
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nah, I don't own espadrilles.
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07.24.2009, 10:14 AM | #4 |
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I wrote you a poem.
it goes like this: roses are red
clowns are too that's not mud on yr espadrilles it's a young calf's poo granted, it's just a rough draft, but I'm happy with it. |
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07.24.2009, 10:20 AM | #5 |
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07.24.2009, 10:25 AM | #6 |
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the search function works but only sometimes poetry sucks but I like the rhymes |
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07.24.2009, 12:38 PM | #7 |
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07.24.2009, 12:40 PM | #8 |
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I'm 12 Years Old And What Is This?
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07.24.2009, 02:19 PM | #9 |
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The Riders
Who treads those level lands of gold, The level fields of mist and air, And rolling mountains manifold And towers of twilight over there? No mortal foot upon them strays, No archer in the towers dwells, But feet too airy for our ways Go up and down their hills and dells. The people out of old romance, And people that have never been, And those that on the border dance Between old history and between Resounding fable, as the king Who held his court at Camelot. There Guinevere is wandering And there the knight Sir Lancelot. And by yon precipe of white, As steep Roncesvalles, and more, Within an inch of fancy's sight, Roland the peerless rides to war. And just the tip of Quixote's spear, The greatest of them all by far, Is surely visible from here! But no: it is the Evening Star. Lord Dunsany
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07.24.2009, 04:02 PM | #10 |
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Poetry threads, where?
My life is one shit poem It never will end |
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07.24.2009, 06:37 PM | #11 |
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^^^ that's a much better poem than most of them. serious goth action.
poems are usually written by someone who has been smitten by their look in the mirror it's all really queer and mostly just worth forgettin'. |
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07.28.2009, 10:05 PM | #12 |
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the whistle
i love her she knows she loves me i know nothing to do but to wait the rules and laws by unknown people who love I'm not stalking her but she wants if another one appears she'll think about him and the possibilities and me at last will win and i know it's true! so close to do
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Quote:
This only works in a thread with nude pictures of JB or pictures of chicks putting pop rocks in their vagoo.
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07.28.2009, 10:32 PM | #14 |
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poems
they are poetic poetry pathetic |
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07.29.2009, 05:28 AM | #15 |
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Confusion Moon:
Funny how fifteen days are seemingly able to induce Changes On what we were willing to be Confusion moon flows Everywhere It takes just One step to unbuild Everything I won't stay up late This time around I won't wake up at 3am This time around |
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09.13.2009, 06:40 AM | #16 |
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I had someone write this poem for me. Funniest thing I've seen in a long time!!!
Liam baby gonna plug that hole Liam bitch you know you make me whole Liam my lovely, my only baby You drive me crazy Lets take a bath Touch my shaft Grab my ass and ride it fast Super dooper man juice blast Liam baby in the black denim pants Lets get freaky and do the naked dance Liam, Liam, Liam, (fades) Liam, Liam... Hahahahhaha!!!
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09.13.2009, 07:04 AM | #17 |
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In England there's an energy drink called Relentless, and on each can is a short poem. Naturally there's a different short poem for every variety. The one I remember the most is "Morning Has Broken" by Wordsworth.
And I have felt A presence that disturbs me with the joy Of elevated thoughts; a sense sublime Of something far more deeply interfused, Whose dwelling is the light of setting suns, And the round ocean and the living air, And the blue sky, and in the mind of man; A motion and a spirit, that impels. |
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09.13.2009, 08:11 AM | #18 |
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my taste is quite boring, many of my favourite poems/writings are EAPoe. I should probably read more poetry but there is so much to wade through to find anything that I connect with. When I read it definately isn't something I only read over once, I need to spend an hour or two finding subtleties and meanings and so on. It's time that I'd rather spend on other things, at least right now.
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09.13.2009, 08:14 AM | #19 |
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The City In The Sea
Lo! Death has reared himself a throne In a strange city lying alone Far down within the dim West, Where the good and the bad and the worst and the best Have gone to their eternal rest. There shrines and palaces and towers (Time-eaten towers that tremble not!) Resemble nothing that is ours. Around, by lifting winds forgot, Resignedly beneath the sky The melancholy waters he. No rays from the holy heaven come down On the long night-time of that town; But light from out the lurid sea Streams up the turrets silently- Gleams up the pinnacles far and free- Up domes- up spires- up kingly halls- Up fanes- up Babylon-like walls- Up shadowy long-forgotten bowers Of sculptured ivy and stone flowers- Up many and many a marvellous shrine Whose wreathed friezes intertwine The viol, the violet, and the vine. Resignedly beneath the sky The melancholy waters lie. So blend the turrets and shadows there That all seem pendulous in air, While from a proud tower in the town Death looks gigantically down. There open fanes and gaping graves Yawn level with the luminous waves; But not the riches there that lie In each idol's diamond eye- Not the gaily-jewelled dead Tempt the waters from their bed; For no ripples curl, alas! Along that wilderness of glass- No swellings tell that winds may be Upon some far-off happier sea- No heavings hint that winds have been On seas less hideously serene. But lo, a stir is in the air! The wave- there is a movement there! As if the towers had thrust aside, In slightly sinking, the dull tide- As if their tops had feebly given A void within the filmy Heaven. The waves have now a redder glow- The hours are breathing faint and low- And when, amid no earthly moans, Down, down that town shall settle hence, Hell, rising from a thousand thrones, Shall do it reverence.
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09.13.2009, 01:14 PM | #20 |
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I just remembered one of the other short poems. It's "Endure Eternally" by Lord Byron. It's one of my faves.
But I have lived, and not lived in vain; My mind may lose it's force, My blood it's fire: And my frame may perish even in conquering pain; But there is that within me which shall tire Torture and time, And breathe when I expire. |
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