06.21.2007, 03:19 PM | #1 |
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So I wrote a new song.
It's the second song that I song on, ever. The first being a song for a girl I know. http://esnips.com/web/Yomtvraps It sounds a lot better when you focus on the music. B of the Bang There were cobwebs on your diary, when I stole the last page. When the sun sets and the steam rises, I turn down the indie, and turn down the lights, and tune in. "My philosophy is dead, along with my god and love for you. You played russian roulette with my heart. There's one more round in this gun, but not in me; Im done. I've taken my last punch. Goodbye I love you very much. I hate to say goodbye this way, but I can't hear the ringtones over the screams. Your shirt is stained from smokes and late night fights. At night Your face is so perfect, the blood is such a shame. I've still got your number and name saved; forever. It said, I said, I said.... I'm glued to this town with super. You were the only thing sharp enough to peel me away. You were the only thing sharp enough to peel me away. You look so pretty covered in dirt. You look so pretty covered in dirt. Infinity green eyes. I just wish my voice wasn't so raspy. |
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06.21.2007, 03:22 PM | #2 |
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Nice lyrics you got there.
Makes mine look stupid.
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06.21.2007, 03:26 PM | #3 |
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Ive been trying to write singable stuff so I've been listening to more conventional music. It helps.
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