write A poem about the sound of your own urine

Genteel Death · 09.16.2014, 03:36 PM

if it sounds like laughter even better

SuchFriendsAreDangerous · 09.16.2014, 03:47 PM

Can I use a piss kit instead, I don't know if my own can pass

Rob Instigator · 09.16.2014, 03:59 PM

the powerful gush
hits water, creates foam
echoes of the piss
reverberate around
muffled in part by my ass if sitting
but loud when standing
and I fight the urge
to flush before I am truly done
as waiting for my final drips
is tedious enough
but when I really have the urge
when I am loaded with seemingly gallons worth
the sound is so loud
it disrupts dinner
a few rooms away

!@#$%! · 09.16.2014, 04:31 PM

are these
your shoes?

turn down
your headphones.

deflinus · 09.16.2014, 04:54 PM

yellow falls
need more water

yellow falls
how much longer?

Nefeli · 09.17.2014, 03:53 AM

knew i had written at least one poem about (my) piss!

i wanna pee
i wanna pee
the pee wants to sing
opera more like it
but the pee is mute
until it sees
the toilet seat
the pee is smart
the pee is crystal
the pee is honest
relaxing like yoga
so much singing
so much treasure
all gone wasted
dont worry baby
more will be generated
golden waters
shining pipelines
i ll dive down
scratch off all the gold
and become rich.

Nefeli · 09.17.2014, 03:55 AM

have one about (my) period, if you want.

Genteel Death · 09.17.2014, 04:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nefeli

have one about (my) period, if you want.

please.

Nefeli · 09.17.2014, 04:18 AM

the reds! the reds! the reds are here!
you know nothing, you cant think above one.
tomatoes with fishes piss, but if not clear.
the flood is generating, the pain is on the dove.
you are an idiot, if you cant see the fun.
the smarts narcissists will call me christian bale
the idiots bastards will insist on getting on bail
the towels, the whites, the skins, the knives
all blending together, adoring the Blood.
the Blood, has the perfect colour, texture and feel
it floods, it warmths, we can still smoke.

---those are from 2008.
---needmakethatblogdunnohow.

EVOLghost · 09.17.2014, 12:56 PM

'the pee is honest'
-nefeli, 2014.

!@#$%! · 09.17.2014, 07:26 PM

nefeli wins

hands down

09.16.2014, 03:36 PM	#1
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09.16.2014, 03:59 PM	#3
Rob Instigator invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In the land of the Instigator Posts: 27,975	the powerful gush hits water, creates foam echoes of the piss reverberate around muffled in part by my ass if sitting but loud when standing and I fight the urge to flush before I am truly done as waiting for my final drips is tedious enough but when I really have the urge when I am loaded with seemingly gallons worth the sound is so loud it disrupts dinner a few rooms away __________________ RXTT's Intellectual Journey - my new blog where I talk about all the books I read.
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09.16.2014, 04:31 PM	#4
!@#$%! invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: mars attacks Posts: 42,564	are these your shoes? turn down your headphones.
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09.16.2014, 04:54 PM	#5
deflinus expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: in the darkest part of your mind Posts: 1,737	yellow falls need more water yellow falls how much longer?
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09.17.2014, 03:53 AM	#6
Nefeli invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 2,147,485,022	knew i had written at least one poem about (my) piss! i wanna pee i wanna pee the pee wants to sing opera more like it but the pee is mute until it sees the toilet seat the pee is smart the pee is crystal the pee is honest relaxing like yoga so much singing so much treasure all gone wasted dont worry baby more will be generated golden waters shining pipelines i ll dive down scratch off all the gold and become rich.
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09.17.2014, 03:55 AM	#7
Nefeli invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 2,147,485,022	have one about (my) period, if you want.
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09.17.2014, 04:18 AM	#9
Nefeli invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 2,147,485,022	the reds! the reds! the reds are here! you know nothing, you cant think above one. tomatoes with fishes piss, but if not clear. the flood is generating, the pain is on the dove. you are an idiot, if you cant see the fun. the smarts narcissists will call me christian bale the idiots bastards will insist on getting on bail the towels, the whites, the skins, the knives all blending together, adoring the Blood. the Blood, has the perfect colour, texture and feel it floods, it warmths, we can still smoke. ---those are from 2008. ---needmakethatblogdunnohow.
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09.17.2014, 12:56 PM	#10
EVOLghost invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: cybatraz! Posts: 11,537	'the pee is honest' -nefeli, 2014.
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09.17.2014, 07:26 PM	#11
!@#$%! invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: mars attacks Posts: 42,564	nefeli wins hands down
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