Everytime it got to the chorus-y bit, I thought you needed a singer. Which is to say, the verses are fine, but the 'chorus' (the bit with the distorted power chords) could maybe do with some shouting or something. Good outro. The main guitar line (yours) is pretty close to chickin' pickin', which is never a bad thing.
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