May I have your advice on a track I just made?
 

I've done this electronica track a few hours ago, I'd like to have a few advices on it... is it good, is it awful?

It's called Precipitate


http://soundcloud.com/syrfox/precipitate

it loads really sloooooooooooooooow

i'll try and d/l later at the moment it is going to take 2 hours @ 2kbps

yes i dunno why, but I just hear the first two seconds of the trippy delay madness :)

Aaah this sucks, it's because of my shitty webhoster
By the way the track actually isn't AT ALL like the first seconds, it's just an intro I did, the rest is more Boards of Canada like
I'm uploading it on Soundcloud

okay. will be here for about 30 minutes I think, then I have to head off to my grandma, I broke and need something to eat, hahaha

Aaah that sucks for some reason it seems my computer won't let me log onto Soundcloud! It just keeps on saying "Logging in" without nothing happening at all
I'll try uploading it on last.fm instead then...

sometimes everythings against you :)

btw I can listen to it now till the piano like sounds start. I know what you mena with the BoC reference now. I wanna hear it!!!!

It's finally coming on both soundcloud and last.fm soon...

http://soundcloud.com/syrfox/precipitate

Waveform is still creating apparently..

its there I will have a listen

Available :)

comments are there now...its epic!

Thanks for the comments man :) as I said there, I actually didn't use bitcrushing, the only effect I used is delay :)

it sounds like you dropped a bunch of marbles in the beginning, I would cut that shit out and go right into the bells, and add some flange or delay to those bells, it will make things more surreal. but I like the melody, there is a lot to build upon it.

The intro reminds me of the bonus track from The Width of an Octopus by Thundering Lizards. The rest is very nice, I will have to listen to it again the next time I'm high.

while I too, don't really understand the need for the intro, I enjoy the tune.

the sound used and the chords progression remind me of the very first SILENT HILL soundtrack composed by Akira Yamaoka in 1999 - an essential work for all noise aficionados. also something by Brad Fidel... 80ies, man!

thumbs up!

I would say: keep the intro and let it appear again later, maybe at the end of that long beatless part. so oyu got a connection. but even if not, let it in, it just brings you on the wrong rail, wich is good I think

I LOVE IT!!!!

Very hallucinating, far from 'ordinary' electronica. Trippy and fucking great.
I especially love the primitiveness of the drumbeat.

Much, much respect.

yes the whole track got a live feel attached, please keep that, its really fresh I think